woensdag 31 juli 2013

Would love feedback.... (wrote on my laptop so no punctuation) AN EARLY START

Chapter one. An early start.

I told my father what you asked me? said Julie. I could feel the blood rushing to my face and my feet began to feel numb. He said you may kiss me on the cheek or on the hand like a gentleman. I am a gentleman I thought or so my grandmother and mother had told me often enough but that’s not where I wanted to kiss her at all. When I had asked her it was plain as day to me that if you were supposed to kiss a girl like Julie it was on the lips and that it was a very secretive thing or so I had thought. He would like to meet you after summer camp today she had said. My face most of been bright red at this stage and if my feet had been numb there is no word for what was going on in my mind. Panic is the closest I could figure. Julie was a beautiful little girl of around eight years old and I a year her senior. Still playing kiss chasing and climbing trees and all those other things that innocent enough children do. I was the enough, she was the innocent. I remember clear as day how beautiful she was to me, long blonde hair just over her shoulders and big bright blue eyes that almost would seem too big for her if she hadn’t got the most wonderful smile to match them. It was the first time I had ever asked a girl for a kiss and she had went home to ask her parents. I suppose I should of just been happy that the father had allowed her to even talk to me again. Never mind kiss her gentle on the cheek. I only wanted a kiss and hold hands for a while under the tree where no one could see us. Now it seemed not only was I not getting my kiss but I had to meet her father too. I don’t remember why but this seemed like a really bad idea to me. Her father, why would he want to see me, what would he say? Would he be angry? Of course he will be angry I want to kiss his daughter and hold her hand my child mind was screaming at me. As if she could sense the panic flowing through me all of a sudden she told me to close my eyes, I did with panic in my heart. I felt soft lips touch mine for the quickest of moments and then she kissed me. Not a passionate kiss like we would expect in our older more jaded years but a peck to which I pecked back. My panic disappeared and was replaced by something new all together. Something I really had no word for, no reference came to mind to help me figure it out. It kinda felt like being on the fast tea cups at the funfair but better. More intense, it spread everywhere to my fingertips and back again. I opened my eyes. Though I would of never believed it possible but there Julie stood more beautiful than ever with red cheeks to match mine. I reached out and took her hand as she quickly grasped back we kissed another time. This time slightly longer and more confident though not harder. Just more at ease. For those moments I forgot about everything, even how to breath seemed labored it didn’t come natural anymore, my stomach was doing flip flops and she was just standing beside me now with a smile that eased my worry anytime I remembered that her father would be screaming at me at the end of the day. Oh my god I thought, we kissed on the lips. Now he’s really going to be angry at me if he was not already. Julie didn’t seem bothered by the thought of her father. She just wanted to know why I had wanted to kiss her in the first place. Why her and not one of the other girls at camp. I couldn’t answer, I knew I thought she was prettier than anyone there. Though my child mind couldn’t tell her that. Don’t know I answered. Why did you kiss me just now? I asked. Wanted to know what it felt like she answered. How did it feel? I asked again. I don’t know she answered, lets try again. This time we kissed longer and pretended like we were people on tv. Moving our mouths open and closed in a French kiss movement but without the tounge. We didn’t know that could be done. Seemed kinda of icky at the time to even think about. Peoples tounges touching eachother. Gross. Kissing Julie was far from gross though. It was positively delightful, made a young boy feel alive and awakened a taste for this thing called kissing. Did you feel anything in your belly I asked one last time? Yes she said, but didn’t know what. I felt calm again. Whatever the feeling was it was part of kissing I thought. Was it because we kissed on the lips made our bellys think we were hungry? But no it wasn’t like hunger. It was more exciting, nervous. Whatever it was I was hooked. Julie! Patrick! Come away from that tree and join the rest shouted a older woman in a yellow summer camp tee shirt. So off we went to join the group, ill never forget the feeling of being surrounded by people yet knowing that really it was only me and Julie there together. The rest didn’t really exist they were there but they didn’t count, like clouds to a blue sky. Part of it but still separate. As the day grew to a close and our parents started to come collect us my panic slowly started to return. What is she tells him that we kissed? Julie and I waited, I was doing my best to look cool and innocent all the while hoping that my mother would be first and I would be gone before he arrived but to no avail,there he was walking towards us. Julie jumped to greet him and I tried to make myself disappear into the wall of the old side building of the church. Is this the boy? He asked. Yes daddy he is answered Julie without missing a beat. So young man why do you want to kiss my daughter and do you think that is ok to do? I stayed silent. Too afraid to answer really, though no answer came to mind. Speak up boy you do have a voice don’t you? Or you could never of asked her for a kiss. I think she is pretty and then I mumbled under my breath something I couldn’t even understand. And what he asked? And I don’t know I said. He laughed long and hard and I just stood there bright red and confused. You don’t know? You know know? I can tell you son that god forgive me for saying this but im thirty seven years old and I still don’t know why it is I want to kiss my wife. Lord knows she complains enough yet no matter what, if I see her I got to kiss her at least once. Maybe its just one of those things he mused she’s her mother’s daughter alright. Snips and snails and all that he finished. Snips and snails I thought? What does that have to do with kissing. Sugar and spice he said and looked fondly at his daughter. Then straight back to me. You can kiss her he said, but like this. He reached down to julies hand lifted it knuckle side up and gentle kissed her hand. i didn’t really want to kiss her I said, some boys dared me to ask I tried to explain. He knew I was lying and so did she. Kiss her hand boy before you insult my daughter and by doing so me too. Julie beamed with pride and offered her hand as if she was a princess. I quickly took it and kissed her hand. With her father laughing all the while and my stomach was no longer dancing at all I noticed. The mere sight of him put a stop to that. As I watched Julie and her father walk away after an awkward goodbye I never thought that would be the last time I seen either of them. I was already dreaming of a summer, days spent kissing her under that old big tree but next day she was not at camp and we were told she was on holiday and would be so till camp was over. When I got home that next evening I protested to my mother I didn’t want to go back to that silly camp anymore but never told her why. My mother being herself tried to talk me into staying but I was having none of it. Nope, nada never again. How could I ever go back and enjoy a day of camp when all I could think about was that I’d never see her or kiss her again. When I think back on that day it strikes me how little I understood of love. That it was not only what I know now are butterfly’s in the belly and secret kisses behind old oak trees. I had my first encounter with the cruel but crucial mistress called love and attraction. In some ways I think my innocence died that day. For I had years before already played mammy and daddies, doctors and nurses and whatever fantasy games come to the mind of children to explore their differences. Though through those games we had been more exposed and straight to the point. That kiss had been closer, it had been honest. Which I found out also later was going to be when kisses were at their best, with honesty and love breaking down the barriers of childhood and into the realm of lust and passion.



Close to my tenth birthday I had badly wanted a bright green grip tape for my hurly stick. Yet a month waiting seemed too long to bare so one day I walked into the local sports store on the way to school and simply put it in my pocket. If kisses made my stomach flip and heart pound. This made my heart pound and scared me silly. Yet not enough to not do it. I really wanted that tape and I had only one way I knew for sure to get it